Blog 7- Revision Process 2

For Project One my revision process went pretty smoothly.  By going over specific things from the group workshop day I was able to make many of my arguments flow smoother and create an overall better format for the piece.  At first, I began my revision process in my room.  I decided that I would work on it a little bit every day until the second draft was due.  I felt good starting out, I felt like I had a decent thesis to work with and now it was just a matter of refining my points to make them sound more eloquent.  I spent about an hour a night working on finding either better pieces of evidence or refining my analysis of the evidence.   I felt like this process was much less stressful than the original process because I had my points well throughout out and only really needed to refine them to make the arguments stronger. 

            I felt much more invested in this writing process than the original writing process because I had a solid idea of where I was going and was able to have fun with expressing my ideas.  I realized that the part that was making me the most stressful in the original writing process was coming up with an idea that I knew I could support and that I could find a strong argument for.  I wouldn’t change my writing process for the second revision of this draft. I think I scheduled it out the right way and completed the task to the best of my ability.